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[NG Tanks Battle]

parlez-vous francais?

lots of math and arrays involved in making the environment respond to the bullets. i can't say you did a very good job, but you put some effort into it for a single-person job.

this is a success for you. good job.

Guilmour responds:

Thanks Guy :) But only 3 :( kkk"!

[Me and My Dinosaur]

Truly beautiful

Very, very good adventure/puzzle game. You rock. The music is great, and the gameplay action is quite fun! You did an excellent job and I you put a TON of effort into this (you made it by yourself?!)

The only extra thing I would have liked is the ability to ride on rex's head while he's running.

Fantastic job though. 5 thumbs up!

CannedMeat responds:

Ha, thanks!

And unfortunately, riding on Rex's head while he runs would just make the game too easy XD

[B.G.T.F.]

...You need to take a "button hitspace" tutorial..

Alright, everthing was moderately mediocre except for the buttons. You need to learn how to make it pressable even if the cursor isn't on the text (like a rectangular hitspace). Most buttons use this technology. Go google a tutorial for it or something...

Besides that, nice attempt at an AS tutorial. Here's a tip: Learn AS a little better, and then try to make another tutorial. An advanced flash user's tutorial.

k,
~mac5

PS: No hard feelings, this wasn't meant to be mean or rude in any way.

LYP responds:

no problem
yes i'll google it..... an advanced flash user's tut?

[waid's wife soundboard]

hahahahahah

That..was..AWESOME :O!!

Awesome job man, that was really funny. I would really give you a 25 or so for "Humor" if it allowed me to :P

The scripting was great as well, I liked how it shaded the button according to which sound clip you were listening to, and then unshaded it when the clip was over.

Really awesome job man.
mac5

MegaZord responds:

I noticed you noticing :O .

[Scrambled Houses!]

You have a lot to work on here...

Ok, first, i can see the the egg movie clip is part of the arm movie clip. THis is not a good thing, because it results in the egg always being the exact same _x value as the arm, and is not affected by motion at all. So you can steer the egg by moving the mouse.

Second, the houses are WAY too big for the stage area, and way too squished together for the game to be challenging.. I got like one miss out of the two minutes i played your game for. In other words, make the houses either more sperad apart or smaller.

Finally, make the game a little faster, maybe even put a few levels in the game, and you'll be good to submit it again!

better luck next time,
Mac5

Old-Tobunshi responds:

lol 'no' to all the above for below reason.
This is a quick mini-game that i did for halloween so i wouldn't feel guilty for not doing anything. :)

[PP Scene Creator v0.2]

Nice...but...

Alright, first of all, I'm guessing you just took the code from the file entitled "CustomizingContextMenu.fla", and put it into your own movie. Am I correct? Also, this is fun for a while, and I'm sure everyone loves this type of flash, but it just isn't enough. You may say, "Oh, but the score is up to 2.6", but this just isn't really fun. I am sorry to admit it, but it just isn't. It's great that you know a little actionscript, but it doesn't really look like you spent a lot of time on it.

Here, I have a little code you may want to try out. It just makes the items pop infront of all the other objects you click on them.

Go to the actions of the movie clips(buttons), and enter the following code in the "onPress" handler:

swapDepths(100);

That's it! It's just one function, that may come in handy sometime.

Also, you need to define your "onReleaseOutside" handlers. If you click on the object, and release outside, they continue to be dragged. Now, you don't HAVE to fix this, I see it all the time in other dressups, but it would be kind of nice to perfect it.

Better luck in the future,
mac5

sonicjam105 responds:

thanx this game will be updated probaly each month

[DTunnel 3D]

This is so underrated!

This is a very good game. I know actionscript, and I know that 3D is a very hard thing to achieve in flash. Just check out some of my games. I am a very big 3d fan, myself, and this is one of my favorite games on NG, so far.

Do not read any abusive, or demoting reivews, and keep up the good work,

mac5

DBarbarian responds:

Thank you.

[The Escape II (revised)]

WHERE DID YOU GET THAT FONT? I NEED THAT FONT!

Cool game. Hey, could you tell me where you got that font from? The one that looks like really rough pencil writing.

5/5

skaterguy8888 responds:

thanks for the review! ok heres the "brooklyn kid" one it looks like graphitti

http://www.flashkit.com/fonts/B/Brooklyn-Michael_-222/index.php

and heres the "caveman" one thats in the credits

http://www.flashkit.com/fonts/C/Caveman-Font-a-l-420/index.php

[The He or She Game 2!!!]

Haha! You fooled me!

That was kinda hard. It's funny though. Do you really know if those people are men or women?

Barry-Fanilow responds:

yes.... i go to shemale sites and look for people