It needs more...
That was a great Idea, and I'm glad to see that you actually did it, but...
You need to animate the motions of the characters better, and draw them more like the style of the background. For example, the owl. His/her wings didn't really look like they were flapping too hard. As much as I like this flash, it just needs more.
Also, i think you should make an actual episode with it, and not just leave it at the intro. That's all.
Don't be demoted my any abusive reviews,
mac5